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The Black Fairy’s Deception

April 2, 2009

What happens when the Prince of HandiLand battles with the Black fairy?

I have a story that will knock your socks off! Here it is! Once upon a time lived Prince Catop. He was the most famous cat in HandiLand! But one day, an evil Black Fairy cast a spell on him because she was very jealous of him getting all the fame. She wanted friends, too, but he got them all. So she mad at him for not being rich and famous.

The next day, when Prince Catop woke up, he noticed something odd! He thought to himself “Where are my maids that wake me up every morning!” When he got dressed and brushed his teeth and hair, he thought a morning drive would help him relax from this odd morning. When he drove, he waved to everyone and they looked at him confused. When he stopped waving, he read the newspaper. It said “Prince Catop Leaves HandiLand for Good This Morning!”

When Prince Catop gasped with confusion, he cried all the way home to his mansion. When he got home, he saw a note and fairy dust on is bed. He read the note and it said “Dear Prince Catop, I’m so sorry! I cast that spell on you. I just wanted fame but when I saw you crying on your morning drive, I got upset and less jealous. Please forgive me? From Black Fairy.

When he rubbed the fairy dust on himself, he went back in time and was back to normal. He quickly read a newspaper next to him. It said “Prince Catop is Back in Town!”

The End

Important: If anyone knows who wrote this story, please let us know. The user didn’t leave their username!

Comments

48 Responses to “The Black Fairy’s Deception”

  1. tabbywalker on April 2nd, 2009 4:04 pm

    i like that story its cool 8)

  2. frisky lee on April 2nd, 2009 6:38 pm

    I MADE DA 1ST COMMENT!!!!!!!!! OH YYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! DISSS RUUUULLLLEEEEEZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!! :-p :-p :-p
    o ya!! luv u mac!!!!!!!!

  3. frisky lee on April 2nd, 2009 6:43 pm

    immmmm back!!!!!!! any1 miss me? o, who am i kiddin no1 readz dis but meeeeee! i wish sum1 else wud find diss!!!! oya! it waz me dat rote dat story!!!!!!!
    llollzzzzzz :-p ;-) :-p :-)

  4. MITZI RICH tired (yawn).... on April 4th, 2009 12:58 pm

    i didnt but who ever wrote the story great job! ;-)

  5. MITZI RICH tired (yawn).... on April 4th, 2009 12:59 pm

    oops bye mitz

  6. Rose Handi on April 5th, 2009 3:11 pm

    Hi. if you wrote this story, AWESOME! it ROCKS! just fix some mistakes, and get it published!

  7. PrincessSweety on April 6th, 2009 8:02 pm

    frisky, did you really write that story?

  8. Sarah on April 11th, 2009 7:40 pm

    You can post stuff on the news? Someone Please tell me how, and THAT was THE BEST!!!

  9. princessfisher iz REALLY excided about Friday!! & VERY sleepy because I got-up VERY early for your homeschooled co-op!! whent out to eat with friendz AWESOME!!!!!!!!! on April 21st, 2009 5:04 pm

    im going to a friendz house on friday this week wwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeee can’t wait to see my friendz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. lilylovesflowers123 on April 24th, 2009 2:03 am

    ok, wel… dis iz like ya noo da 2nd time eyez commentid… sooooo ya. by da way, IM BRITISH! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO DA BRITISH! OHYA subject… subject, wel da line “so she mad at him for not being rich and famous”
    dont make sens. sooooo ya part from dat GRREEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAT STOOOOOOOOOORY!!!!!!!! bub buh buh buh buhhh im lovin it.

  11. rickety on April 24th, 2009 9:02 am

    how do u send a story i want to send one

  12. rickety on April 24th, 2009 9:02 am

    IM AN AUTHOR

  13. Rose on April 24th, 2009 4:13 pm

    that story is great, only should become a chapter book. Never less, i am training to be a writer so i guess i could try…..any way that story is nice only a little tooooo short.

  14. Cynders (Hannah) on April 27th, 2009 3:58 pm

    Hey frisky lee i read ur commentz dont worryz sombodyz carez enough 2 read ur commentz lol meet me herez sometime soon kk byez 4 now oh yeah the story waz very good who ever wrote it :? it doesnt matter 2 me though i just though it was good it would be nice 2 find out who wrote it though :mrgreen: oh by the wayz i am the dark fairie lol hah byz 4 now see u around pplz!!! :mrgreen:

  15. secret person all right mitzirich on April 27th, 2009 8:49 pm

    hi *mgr* bye!

  16. Cynders (Hannah) on May 17th, 2009 2:36 pm

    umm ok hi 2 u 2

  17. Kappa Maki on May 24th, 2009 4:43 pm

    Pawsome story How did you come up with such a good story???????????

    P.S I love handiland

  18. Cynders (Hannah) on May 30th, 2009 1:35 pm

    = ^ . ^ =

  19. tiya on June 5th, 2009 4:46 pm

    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~…………………………………~~~~~~~~~~~.

  20. tabbywalker on June 9th, 2009 4:43 pm

    rickity and any body who dosent know how to post a story it is somewhere in the news section that will tell you everything you want to know

    ps cynders why did you put a Z on every word

  21. Tunaboy on June 10th, 2009 1:12 pm

    i did not read this but i have to ask, every time i want to send a story it says i cant becuse of a errer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :(

  22. Tunaboy on June 10th, 2009 1:17 pm

    hello there i just want to say that cloe33 ( well i think thats her name)
    is in L O V E with some cat named rickety!
    Becuse i went her house it said imiss u rickety,
    and, i love YOU!
    and a lot of other stuff! and if ur reading this don’t be mad becuse it’s true! ;)

  23. Tunaboy on June 10th, 2009 1:22 pm

    i dont know why i ceep typing stuff but i love it becuse theres no dumb erres!
    :) :) :) :>

  24. Tunaboy on June 10th, 2009 1:27 pm

    who can guss what im saying!? tx 4 ths cl wb st
    who ever gusses first wins!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :0 :) :) :)

  25. Tunaboy on June 11th, 2009 12:57 pm

    i wish i could write a story but when i try it says i cant becuse of dumb
    erres! :D :(

  26. Tunaboy on June 11th, 2009 12:58 pm

    B)

  27. kittamomma on June 11th, 2009 1:05 pm

    :mrgreen

  28. kittamomma on June 11th, 2009 1:12 pm

    thx to my sister tunaboy my cat was made a girl bleh! now i cant sit on chair or any thing cuz ill change into girly cloths MEGA BLEH! but i guess ill have to cope with it. kittamoma (wanted to be known as hammer) is out peace

  29. kittamomma on June 11th, 2009 1:13 pm

    oh and the story is cool to.

  30. kittamomma on June 11th, 2009 1:18 pm

    i lied about everything i just said and im wierd!!!!!!!!!!
    PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  31. Umeboshi on June 11th, 2009 10:26 pm

    nice story, you should write more as good as this one more often ^-^
    I love it, would you please write some more?

    UMEBOSHI

  32. Tunaboy (Girl) on June 28th, 2009 7:40 pm

    somone plz talk 2 me!
    and i dont even know who KITTAMOMMA is!!
    :(
    and he is sooooooooooo weird he says PEACE! like hes some hippie!
    i dont realy use this this 2 say if i like the story,
    i just use it to talk 2 people!!!
    or shoul i say catz!!!
    u know i have like 2,000 bonus points!!!
    and hello UMEBOSH (whatever that means) im just saying hi becuse ur the only 1 that i sall on there
    this thing is very long……
    well ill see u guys l8r
    P.S.

    Kittamomma is a boy (how weird!) ill keep writing here 4 somone 2 say somthing 2 me ;)
    ill be kinda like icarly (if youv herd of it) if u writ 2 me on this thing ill writ back!

    seya!!!
    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

  33. Tunaboy (Girl) on June 28th, 2009 7:43 pm

    I just want 2 say one thing………..
    KITTAMOMMA IS A WEIDO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    and whene he wrote i lied about everything and he said that hes a weido
    PEACE!!!!

    that was funny……. :) ;)

  34. Tunaboy (Girl) on June 29th, 2009 7:57 pm

    ilove u @#$% (this name has bene protected so that no one will know who i love

  35. Tunaboy (Girl) on June 29th, 2009 7:57 pm

    dont worry its not a bad word!!!

  36. mitzirich on July 1st, 2009 3:08 pm

    cool STORYZ IT IZ AMSUMEZ

  37. Tunaboy on July 7th, 2009 5:54 pm

    :p
    :D
    :)
    :D
    :)
    :p

    walking on a bed of smiles :)

  38. Tunaboy on July 7th, 2009 5:59 pm

    I
    :)
    :(
    :(
    :(
    :(
    I

    eat ur cabbob’s!!!!!! (lol)
    LOVE tunaboy!!!!!

  39. Tunaboy on July 7th, 2009 6:00 pm

    i messed up……..

  40. JORDIEMEAW on July 12th, 2009 4:46 pm

    GRATE STORY

  41. roxell on July 15th, 2009 5:34 pm

    so she mad at him?it is…so she got mad at him :|

  42. roxell on July 15th, 2009 5:38 pm

    :o that is a nice fairy…at the end…..that is a pretty story!!!:D

  43. Tunaboy on July 23rd, 2009 1:48 pm

    so she mad at him?
    i just noticed that too roxell!!!

  44. ~twilightfan~ aka shawty on August 16th, 2009 9:24 pm

    Yo0 tunaboy? Ur my budd but i just wanna no…BUT DONT GET MAD IM JUST ASKING! Are you a boy?Or a girl? Cause i see u dressed like a girl but ur name is tunaBOY!? Ummm sorry if this affends u! :,,,(

  45. Domino on August 19th, 2009 3:43 am

    i think this is a great story.
    if you wrote this, you are very creative, i loved this, it is so cool

  46. Katie on September 28th, 2009 5:00 pm

    how do you write a story?

  47. Katie on September 28th, 2009 5:01 pm

    how do you write your story and put it on the catwalk?

  48. Megan on September 30th, 2009 1:13 pm

    wow your really great i wonder if i am that good well u couldrite aother and i will read it :]:]:];]:};];];];];]

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